This story is written to rhyme. It’s a cute concept, but the sentences are unwieldy and the text doesn’t really flow. There’s not much rhythm between lines (as one might expect from a rhyming book). There are also several misused/misspelled words (i.e. “brought” instead of “bought”).
That said though, the story made me chuckle, and I can certainly see kids enjoying this one. It’s hard to go wrong with a “poop” story, after all.
Adorable. Simple, fun, plenty of detail.
Not bad. I would suggest a clearer font face for the title – especially for a Kindle book.