Elphie

Hagit R & Or Oron


 

28959715Story:

This was a nice idea, but I was disappointed. A little more editing and effort would have pushed this into a whole different category. As is though, Elphie is bogged down with misspellings and awkward language usage.

Elphie’s dad is overprotective and unaware all at once. He doesn’t want Elphie to climb or run, but then he gets distracted with a phone call, leaving Elphie sitting on the curb.

Illustrations:

The artwork is quite cute throughout. There’s a lot of nice detail to keep a kid interested, and there are plenty of funny little additions that I enjoyed.

Cover:

The title is a bit long (so the font is small), but otherwise I can’t complain. Very cute.

*****

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